Ms Dawkins brought some berries to school for us to try.
We wrote stories about the berries.
Come and read them.
Author: Maggie
I didn't like the berries because you get lots of juice all over your hands!
I think Meghan really liked looking at the berries.
Author: Jonah
The blackberries were yummy because they were juicy.
They were icy. They were delish. They were delishioso!
Author: Olly J
We had different berries. They were yum because there were different berries.
Author: Tabitha
Today I ate berries. They were good because they were yummy.
Really really yummy!
Author: Charlie
I liked the blueberries because my Mum says I like blueberries.There were lots of berries to eat.
Ms Dawkins put the berries on the table. But to eat after we had finished story writing. They will be yummy to eat after our story writing.
Author: Bobby
We had blueberries. They were yummy. I liked the strawberries because they taste different.
Author: Hue
I liked the blackberries. They were juicy. The juice looked like blood. I loved them.
Author: Nathan
Today we had berries. I did not like them because I did not like the seeds. The blueberries were small.
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